My Hopes, Memories and Dreams

Tainted Palette

Black thoughts stain

Like inkBlack-Ink-Splatters

On the silk of the soul

 

Rinse
               Soak
                            Spin
Wring

 

Laundered by the Light

Fade

Infuse with Pain

Remain.

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21 responses

  1. Hi Colleen. like the notion of the line “the silk of the soul” and the black ink stains…reminds me of Coal Man’s post about the psych inkblot tests. The image and words work strongly to reinforce each other.

    July 30, 2009 at 1:24 pm

    • Thank you for taking the time to read it ! I’ll have to check our Coal Man’s post…

      July 30, 2009 at 8:50 pm

  2. Forrester McLeod

    Colleen!

    That’s so cool! Love the words, the simplicity, and the visual.

    Thank You! 🙂

    July 30, 2009 at 6:51 pm

  3. Thanks Forrester ! Glad you liked it 🙂

    July 30, 2009 at 8:51 pm

  4. So, big C, what’s next? what’s next? more more squealed the peanut gallery…grins.

    August 1, 2009 at 3:14 am

    • Ha Ha…I feel privileged that you’re “checking in” !
      I’m just sitting back for now, quietly aniticpating
      the inspiration my weekend may bring !

      August 1, 2009 at 3:19 am

  5. A Rorsach poem with such meaningful concepts is so few words. This will sound so trite, but it’s beautiful, beautiful.

    August 2, 2009 at 2:08 pm

    • How lovely of you to comment on my little poem. I find it particularly scary sharing my poetry…I’m not sure why…maybe a lack of confidence…maybe I’m just a harsh judge on myself, so such comments always surprise and delight !

      August 3, 2009 at 7:09 am

  6. Colleen, this is wonderful. Please keep sharing–you’re clearly very talented! I’ll be back later to dig into your lovely space. Thanks for stopping by so I could find you:)

    August 6, 2009 at 1:58 pm

    • Thanks for you lovely comment ! I truly appreciate the feedback.

      August 7, 2009 at 1:23 am

  7. blissbait

    Hey! I remember this! I LOVE this poem! I’m so happy You’ve brought it back out to play now that Your playground is full and thriving.

    Thank You and Cheers and Namaste. 🙂

    November 22, 2009 at 3:15 pm

    • Thanks Bliss. I’m still enthralled by your “financial adventure” term. I Love it. I was driving to the supermarket this afternoon saying to myself…” I do not have financial stress…I am simply on a financial adventure at this point in my life.” So thank you…it eases the fury.

      November 23, 2009 at 8:21 am

  8. in a few words you capture so much, so be scared, but don’t stop sharing your wonderful talents with us!!!

    November 23, 2009 at 4:15 am

    • OH, thanks Purple ! Love the mutual sharing that flies around this place !

      November 23, 2009 at 8:22 am

  9. alina1985

    This poetry was touched my heart.
    I’m still thinking of this beautifull words.
    Many significations…
    Thank you,Colleen
    Enjoy your day 🙂

    November 23, 2009 at 1:31 pm

    • Thank you. It’s one of my favourites ! These come to me usually late at night when I am in that “pre sleep” stage !

      November 23, 2009 at 9:55 pm

      • alina1985

        This is the perfect moment to be inspired then 😉
        I hope that every night will be the same 🙂

        Have a great day,my friend!!!

        November 24, 2009 at 9:10 pm

  10. ‘Black thoughts stain

    Like ink

    On the silk of the soul’

    Beautiful words Colleen.

    November 23, 2009 at 8:54 pm

    • Hi Paul ! Nice to see you. Hope you are keeping well.

      November 23, 2009 at 9:56 pm

  11. spiritteacher

    Beautiful description of the soul’s journey. May you eventually journey into the light and stay there. Love, Sharie

    November 24, 2009 at 12:45 pm

  12. It’s even better the second and third time.

    November 25, 2009 at 2:03 pm

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