Freedom
stealthily
in search of the key
we dip into pockets
near and far
yet to discover
the illusive freedom
exists within
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Thanks to Sara Fryd for the inspiration !
stealthily
in search of the key
we dip into pockets
near and far
yet to discover
the illusive freedom
exists within
———————————
Thanks to Sara Fryd for the inspiration !
This entry was posted on August 30, 2009 by Colleen DuBois. It was filed under Poetry and was tagged with fear, freedom, inspiration, Musings, poems, Poetry, spiritual healing, Writing.
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Fabulous Colleen!
August 30, 2009 at 12:46 pm
Glad you liked it ! Isn’t it great that we can gain inspiration through this collective blogging experience ?
August 31, 2009 at 3:11 am
Very well composed. Interesting mix of verse.
you might like my stuff http://jamiespencer.wordpress.com
August 30, 2009 at 5:47 pm
Thanks Jaymie. I’ve taken a look at your blog and I will return !
September 1, 2009 at 12:59 pm
An amazing day when we make the discovery.
September 1, 2009 at 2:46 am
And for some that day take longer to come than others…sometimes never acutally realised. How sad that would be, to remain on an endless search for something that is actually so close and accessible. Hmm…
September 1, 2009 at 1:02 pm
Oh how sweet you are. Who’s beautiful chocolate eyes? So much meaning with so few words. A master’s trait.
September 1, 2009 at 2:29 pm
My eldest daughter’s beautiful chocolate eyes. When she was little I’d say “Can I steal a chocolate ?” and pretend to snatch one of her eyes…she’d chuckle along with me.
September 1, 2009 at 9:37 pm
Oh to have had a mom like you as my brother used to say. 🙂
September 2, 2009 at 5:04 am
Simple, pure, real. I love it.
September 1, 2009 at 4:18 pm
Thank you ! Sometimes these little verses just jump out from no-where and grab you don’t they ?
September 1, 2009 at 9:38 pm
You had it pretty rough growing up, Colleen.
That you’ve been able to maintain your
keen sense of honest and natural femininity
deserves a plus in my book. Good for you!
Under the radar and over my head,
your search goes on with my blessing.
Everything comes with a price, and
freedom is no exception. Weigh the costs
and keep your balance, and you’ll be fine.
I wish and yours the best of luck!
Sincerely, Uncle Tree
March 7, 2010 at 1:49 pm
Thank you as always Uncle Tree for your insightful words of support. I’m a Libran, so treading the delicate balance beam is my forte ! x
March 7, 2010 at 10:35 pm
love the playfulness in this one…great once we find it as well…
March 7, 2010 at 2:47 pm
Thanks Brian… it’s a little life reminder I like to revisit every now and then !
March 7, 2010 at 10:36 pm
very musical and meaningful, colleenincairns… and thank you for stopping by to say hello. a family emergency derailed the blog, but we’re gradually coming out of it… m.
March 7, 2010 at 4:26 pm
Marstead ! lovely to hear from you. I hope peace and tranquility visits upon you and yours ….and stays around for a while.
March 7, 2010 at 10:40 pm
Hey! This is beautiful! One of my FAVOURITE things about getting older is just what You speak of. I find myself more and more looking joyfully inside myself for freedom, love, bliss, answers. Feels SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! Thank You and Big Hugs and Namaste. 🙂
March 8, 2010 at 1:16 am
Hi Bliss…your messages are ALWAYS so full of Life and Hope and Freedom ! Bliss You !!!
March 8, 2010 at 11:08 am
Nice work. Powerful message as well. Thanks 🙂
March 9, 2010 at 2:16 am