Pierced through the Heart
Like a needle
Pierced straight through the heart
Desire
Loss
Craving
…the inaccessible…
Patterns that bleed
Through each year
Each month
Week
Day
Moment
Of the tapestry
That is
My Childhood Story
Those knots
in my stomach
…Stitched so tight
Leave gaping holes
In my core
My sense of love
for myself
So intrinsically linked
With
You
good to see this
March 14, 2010 at 3:37 pm
Thanks for visiting !
March 16, 2010 at 7:43 am
Thank you for stopping by, I hope all is good with you. I am trying to finish up a computer aps course by end of spring break, then I can concentrate on composition. Hopefully I can get back to simply concentrating on writing and squeeze a little poetry in. I miss everyone.
March 15, 2010 at 3:05 am
Hi Charles, well you certainly don’t want to spread yourself too thin, so if it’s a break you need for a while then I’m sure there will be a silver lining of a burst of creativity on you return !
March 16, 2010 at 7:46 am
This is very sweet, kinda makes me sad. 😦
March 15, 2010 at 3:09 am
Lovely words. Love your blot theme.
March 15, 2010 at 1:42 pm
Hi ! Pleased you liked it ! Thanks for visiting.
March 16, 2010 at 7:46 am
That image is perfect for your lines. The visually “declining steps of time” is a nice touch. Great poem, Colleen 🙂
March 15, 2010 at 2:41 pm
Thank you for saying so. Sometimes they just strike when I least expect it !
March 16, 2010 at 7:48 am
Woooow.This is very touching.
I like a lot your poems.You describe feelings in very interesting way.The picture is beautiful.Thank you,my dear friend!!
Have a wonderful day!! 🙂
March 16, 2010 at 9:29 am
Thanks Alina, You have a great day too !
March 16, 2010 at 9:16 pm
That is a thought-provoking image up there, Colleen.
And, the way you bled your words was magnificent!
I like your visual arrangement, too. This is one of your best. 🙂
Hope you had a wonderful Saint Patrick’s Day!
I be bleeedin’ green, UT
March 17, 2010 at 10:18 am
Thank you UT. Always happy to hear you appreciate my writing. 🙂
March 17, 2010 at 10:47 pm