My Hopes, Memories and Dreams

Ebb and Flow

Like a line in the sand                          

You draw me to you…

Each grain of tender energy

Leaves trails

Along the valleys

of breath intertwined

then, exhaled

To settle

Between the ebb and flow

of the gentle, knowing tide

that binds us

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14 responses

  1. Lovely Coleen, really love the undulating way this poems meanders. ‘the tides that bind us’ – great play on words there! Well rounded and well done! thanks!

    March 23, 2010 at 11:22 pm

    • Hello ! Thank you for saying so. Glad you liked it !

      March 25, 2010 at 9:29 am

  2. Lush, gorgeous, and oh so romantic.

    March 23, 2010 at 11:43 pm

  3. that poem is beautiful colleen.. the photo you selected is perfect for it too.

    March 24, 2010 at 12:19 am

    • Hi Lynn ! How are you ? Nice to hear from you and thanks !

      March 25, 2010 at 9:31 am

  4. ohhh this is sensual Colleen… full of texture and underlying emotion.. the antipodean angel strikes deep again.. bravo!

    March 25, 2010 at 7:37 am

    • Ha ha ! Thank you TigerCity ! Hugz from Down Under !

      March 25, 2010 at 9:32 am

  5. Beautiful poem,mon amie!
    The words are very nice and the picture magnificent!It represents the words of the poem!
    Thank you for share it!

    Enjoy your day!!! 🙂 😉

    March 25, 2010 at 8:36 am

    • Hi gorgeous girl ! Your comments always make me feel cheery. x

      March 25, 2010 at 9:33 am

  6. Beautiful words and a lovely picture, Colleen.

    March 25, 2010 at 8:58 am

    • Thank you Paul. Yes the pic is just perfect isn’t it ? I leapt when I found it !

      March 25, 2010 at 9:33 am

  7. “Each grain of tender energy…”

    That is a cool way to look at that, Collen. Nice one!
    Scientifically true, with a touch of femininity.

    Waving ~ away ~ UT

    March 26, 2010 at 8:26 am

    • Thank you Uncle Tree. Yes, it seemed such an apt way to describe the sensation!

      March 26, 2010 at 9:01 am

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