Like a line in the sand
You draw me to you…
Each grain of tender energy
Along the valleys
of breath intertwined
Between the ebb and flow
of the gentle, knowing tide
that binds us
This entry was posted on March 23, 2010 by Colleen DuBois. It was filed under Poetry and was tagged with inspiration, life, Musings, poems, Poetry, reflection, relationships, Writing.
Lovely Coleen, really love the undulating way this poems meanders. ‘the tides that bind us’ – great play on words there! Well rounded and well done! thanks!
March 23, 2010 at 11:22 pm
Hello ! Thank you for saying so. Glad you liked it !
March 25, 2010 at 9:29 am
Lush, gorgeous, and oh so romantic.
March 23, 2010 at 11:43 pm
Thanks Sara. I’ve been keeping my eye on Blog Talk radio on http://www.voxpoetica.com for your poetry reading…I think it’s later on today my time…
March 25, 2010 at 9:31 am
that poem is beautiful colleen.. the photo you selected is perfect for it too.
March 24, 2010 at 12:19 am
Hi Lynn ! How are you ? Nice to hear from you and thanks !
ohhh this is sensual Colleen… full of texture and underlying emotion.. the antipodean angel strikes deep again.. bravo!
March 25, 2010 at 7:37 am
Ha ha ! Thank you TigerCity ! Hugz from Down Under !
March 25, 2010 at 9:32 am
Beautiful poem,mon amie!
The words are very nice and the picture magnificent!It represents the words of the poem!
Thank you for share it!
Enjoy your day!!! 🙂 😉
March 25, 2010 at 8:36 am
Hi gorgeous girl ! Your comments always make me feel cheery. x
March 25, 2010 at 9:33 am
Beautiful words and a lovely picture, Colleen.
March 25, 2010 at 8:58 am
Thank you Paul. Yes the pic is just perfect isn’t it ? I leapt when I found it !
“Each grain of tender energy…”
That is a cool way to look at that, Collen. Nice one!
Scientifically true, with a touch of femininity.
Waving ~ away ~ UT
March 26, 2010 at 8:26 am
Thank you Uncle Tree. Yes, it seemed such an apt way to describe the sensation!
March 26, 2010 at 9:01 am
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