Desperately, seeking Miley
A stained red pout
Bored and boring
…like countless others
upon the lens
in Raven Vixen
belie the shallow pools within
….just one small glimpse
of plastic perfection
binding an ego
“Doe-eyes…belie the shallow pools within”
I think you said it all right there, Colleen.
She is 18. And has already turned to plastic?
Oh, my! I guess we all seek perfection in some
form or another. Let her go hedonistic, and get
it out of her system while she’s young.
Of course, she’s not my daughter, and I’m not
actually advising her to do so. Ya know? 😉 UT
March 21, 2011 at 10:02 pm
April 20, 2011 at 12:20 am
love the word flow.
May 25, 2011 at 12:17 am
I have read through several of the poems and felt their essence. You have a marvellous ability to capture feeling: obviously you are emotionally intelligent and an intuitive: two highly valued intelligences in the creative world.
Are you aware of Book Creators Circle in Cairns? I am a member. This is my profile.
July 10, 2011 at 10:05 am
Thank you so much Megan. Your comment means a lot to me =) I will have a look at Book Creators Circle now!
July 10, 2011 at 11:30 am