My Hopes, Memories and Dreams

Desperately, seeking Miley

A stained red pout

curved

….cracked

……….craving

Bored and boring

…like countless others

Pressed dispassionately

upon the lens

Doe-eyes outlined

in Raven Vixen

belie the shallow pools within

Desperately pleading

seeking

external  capture

….just one small glimpse

of plastic perfection

binding an ego

stripped bare

from

within

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5 responses

  1. “Doe-eyes…belie the shallow pools within”

    I think you said it all right there, Colleen.
    She is 18. And has already turned to plastic?
    Oh, my! I guess we all seek perfection in some
    form or another. Let her go hedonistic, and get
    it out of her system while she’s young.

    Of course, she’s not my daughter, and I’m not
    actually advising her to do so. Ya know? 😉 UT

    March 21, 2011 at 10:02 pm

  2. Brutal!

    Good!

    Good!

    Brutal!

    April 20, 2011 at 12:20 am

  3. love the word flow.
    wow.

    keep inspiring…

    May 25, 2011 at 12:17 am

  4. Hi Colleen
    I have read through several of the poems and felt their essence. You have a marvellous ability to capture feeling: obviously you are emotionally intelligent and an intuitive: two highly valued intelligences in the creative world.

    Are you aware of Book Creators Circle in Cairns? I am a member. This is my profile.

    July 10, 2011 at 10:05 am

    • Thank you so much Megan. Your comment means a lot to me =) I will have a look at Book Creators Circle now!

      July 10, 2011 at 11:30 am

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